Wednesday 25 December 2013

Are you still playing your Flute?



Are you still playing your flute?
When there is hardly time for our love
I am feeling guilty
To be longing for your song
The melody concealed in the slim hollow of the bamboo
Uncovered by the breath of an artist
Composed by his fingers
Blown by the wind
To the depth of my heart.
 
Are you still playing your flute?
In the village so quiet and deserted
Amidst the sick rice field
While here it has become a luxury
To spend time watching the rain
Gazing at the evening rays
Collecting dew drops
Or enjoying the fragrance of flowers.

Are you still playing your flute?
The more it disturbs my conscience
to be thinking of you
in the hazard of you
my younger brothers unemployed and desperate
my people disunited by politics
my friend slaughtered mercilessly
this world is too old and bleeding
By Zurinah Hassan

Meaning
Verse 1
The persona asks her partner if he is still playing the flute when he has no time for her. She feels torn by the fact that she longs to her hear him playing the flute.

Verse 2
She continues to ask if he is still playing the flute when the village has been abandoned. This is due to the rice fields not doing well at all. In addition, leisurely activities have become a luxury and therefore irrelevant in the midst of hard times.

Verse 3
The persona regrets that she is still thinking of him when there are many problems around her. Her brothers are unemployed, the people are divided by politics, her friend has been killed and the whole world seems to be torn by troubles. 


Elements of the Poem
Persona
The persona is probably the poet herself or a woman who is in live with a flautist

Themes
  • Adopting to change
  • Longing for a lost love
  • Family and social commitments
  • Neglect of responsibilities
Message
  • Be responsible
  • Do not neglect what is important
Moral values
  • Be responsible 
  • Be aware of what is happening around you  
  • Have a sense of balance in your life

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